Deliver

November 3, 2009 - Leave a Response

I’ve read a trunk-load of screenplays in my hari-kari, roller coaster, stop/start/GO adventure through screenwriting.  I can tell you with full authority, 99% of them are gArBagE!

Garbage, no plot, not direction, no love for character, or for the audience  intended to endure the garbage.  They aren’t about you.  They are about something else, an ego trip or a bank account or whatever.

Tarantino is different.  Now, I’m not a big fan of Tarantino, I like romance over graphic violence and prefer kindness to brutality, but I’ve seen everything he’s made and I’ve loved it.

The article below explains very well why his screenplays are masterpieces and they win every time.  It’s because they are well written.  It’s because Tarantino LOVES his story.  He loves his characters deeply.   On some sadistic level, in some self serving way, he loves his audience or at least the part of the audience that loves him.  He’s sick that way, whatta ya do, at least he puts it on paper and doesn’t bring it to my house.  But, he wants to show you something, YOU,  like you’re his best friend in Kindergarten and EVERYTHING is cool and worthy of being explored.

I have a new writing partner,  she a literary studies professor and a longtime writer, but she’d never written a screenplay.   I continue to guide her to Tarantino as a reference among a long list of other great resources and screenplays.  I know she ignores the Tarantino references, because this first project is a Romantic Comedy, but, she needs to get it (she’s smart, she will and this blog is written for her anyway! Lol).  No one writes with the commitment to deliver a beat or a moment like Tarantino.   For his films to work, EVERY beat MUST land because his dialogue is layered and referential and is the icing on a truck-load of unbelievably juicy subtext. And there is no EGO in his dialogue,  it may seem like it’s all ego, it’s not.  It’s written so grandiose and pompous so that… you… will hear him.  He is saying something to YOU.  Listen.

A great screenplay may deliver that sort of subtext once, maybe twice in a film, but Tarantino will deliver it two or twenty times, he’ll deliver for however many of those moments it takes for you to get what he’s trying to say.  And, he does NOT miss. You may walk out of the theater, but he delivered.

It’s hot. A good screenplay is hot.  It makes you feel, think and breathe things you didn’t come to the theater to feel, think and breathe.  I mean you came for the popcorn and to get the hell out of your life for a minute, or for a fantastical to massive adrenaline or dopamine rush, depending on the movies you like to see. Tarantino isn’t just about the rush, altho he’s definitely an adrenaline junky.   He’s about the art.  Art delivers the message.  This man always has a message, even if the message is (finger pointing at you) “ha-ha… jackass!!”

Here’s an article on writing great web content that made this post mandatory.  The guy is a web content guru and he uses Resevoir Dog‘s Mr. Orange to illustrate the idea that if you’re going be in the business of crafting and selling collections of words,  deliver something.  It’s like a tax accountant in tax season.  You pay them money they deliver you a 500 page tax document.  It’s called a deliverable.  You didn’t know it was gonna be 500 pages, but they did, that’s why they charged you so much freaking money.

http://www.copyblogger.com/quentin-tarantino/

“…There are few writers like Tarantino, and though his verbal carpet bombs and kinetic escalation of violence aren’t for everyone, there is no doubt that the dude follows his muse. Those who love him will eagerly wait in lines wrapped around the block to show their support.

In short, Tarantino sells it every time. And by it, I mean an ironclad belief in the worlds he’s created.

On Larry’s post, a great conversation continued downstairs in the comments, where a second Tarantino clip was referenced, the “Sicilian Scene” from True Romance. Though I love both movies, I was inspired to write this post by a scene from Tarantino’s earliest feature, Reservoir Dogs.

Selling it

In Reservoir Dogs, Tarantino assembles a marvelous scene, on the surface about gaining the confidence of the men the protagonist plans to double cross. Closer inspection reveals the scene for what it really is, a seven-and-a-half-minute love letter to the art of storytelling.

The film itself is about a bank robbery gone bad, though Tarantino manages to turn the adage, “show not tell” upside down by showing only a few seconds of the robbery, while his characters sit around for the rest of the film swapping one slice of story at a time…”

Crafting a Scene, The Basics

October 8, 2009 - Leave a Response

I’ll start this post off by saying, I didn’t find what I was looking for.   I was looking for structural elements to a scene.   There are very specific structural elements to well crafted scenes.  I did however, find lots of good content and scene development resources, so enjoy these until I find what I’m looking for and can offer that.

Formatting

Give up making this difficult.  It’s the easiest part. Here are a few quick links (great resources):

Screenplay Formatting Basics: http://www.scriptologist.com/Magazine/Formatting/formatting.html

Screenplay formatting continued: http://www.scriptologist.com/Magazine/Formatting/Formatting_II/formatting_ii.html

Further: http://www.screenwriting.info/04.php

And, finally: http://www.googobits.com/articles/p2-505-screenwriting-the-basics.html

Crafting Scenes

Here is a fabulous article on designing character, intent and drama in and between scenes: http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/art/scene.php

The idea of Visual Grammar http://www.unique-screenwriting.com/rules-of-fight-club.html

Why scenes work: http://writing-dramatic-scripts.suite101.com/article.cfm/how_to_write_dramatic_scenes_for_screenplays

How to indicate special scene considerations: http://en.allexperts.com/q/Writing-Plays-Screenwriting-677/indicate-scene-B-W.htm

How many scenes? http://www.moviedeaths.com/phorum/read.php?1,3065

Great Rules for writing action and scene description: http://www.aboutascreenplay.com/storytelling-techniques/15-tips-for-writing-scene-description/

Make sure your scenes aren’t what they seem.  Great article: http://www.aboutascreenplay.com/storytelling-techniques/15-tips-for-writing-scene-description/

The Best of the Best, writing the perfect scene.  Don’t miss this interview with John Patrick Shanley on writing Doubt:  http://hubpages.com/hub/Screenwriting-The-Perfect-Scene <—-  Read this article!

Love scene guidelines – http://www.writing-world.com/romance/love.shtml

Character development and emotional character arcs, very good article: http://www.sff.net/people/alicia/artscenestructure.htm

Domino Theory. Moving the action forward http://www.reviewfuse.com/resources/lesson/3/

A Great Exercise

Write dialogue for a Nora Ephron Film. http://www.learner.org/interactives/cinema/screenwriting/page2.html

Just for Fun!

10 Qualities  of a Great Movie Spanking (Part 2): http://blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=111681588&blogID=285166715

A Starting Point

September 28, 2009 - Leave a Response

I want to finish an old Screenplay that I’ve been unable to craft all of on my own.  I have a new writing partner who is a professional writer with no screenwriting experience.  This post is an introduction to screenwriting designed for her.  A ‘best of the best’ introduction.  Let’s see how well this goes.

A Theory Review from Wikipedia:

Classic Stuff- These first two are really the core writing approaches that result in great screenwriting.

The Hero’s Journey, Joseph Campbellhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#The_Hero.27s_Journey

and

Syd Field’s Screenwriting Paradigmhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#Syd_Field.27s_Paradigm

and one approach I’m not familiar with but like,

The Sequence Approachhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#The_sequence_approach

Story Elements in Film

Imagery http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#Imagery

Characterhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Character_arc

Screenplay Structure

Formathttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#Feature_film

3 Act Structure – This is a good start actually with lots of additional links. http://www.ehow.com/how_5119356_structure-screenplay-three-acts.html

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=taTqPGtA53M

7 Act Structure http://complicationsensue.blogspot.com/2005/05/more-evidence-that-3-act-structure-is.html

9 Act Structure – Thanks Jordan Dane, http://www.jordandane.com/writers_9.php

Here is a Google search with additional Screenplay Structure resources – http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&hs=Xn7&q=screenplay+structure&revid=1797069117&ei=QmrBSub0BIPe8Qb8z8iTBg&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=broad-revision&cd=5&ved=0CDYQ1QIoBA

Screenwriting Software

I prefer Final Draft or just formatting it myself  in Word, but everyone should make their own choices based on what is available.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Screenwriting#Screenwriting_software

Recommended Reading

http://www.pullins.com/Books/01281PracticalScreenwriting.htm

Bird by Bird

http://www.amazon.com/Writing-screenplay-beyond-three-act-structure/lm/R1M5M0BSCLA37X

Screenwriting Don’tshttp://hubpages.com/hub/The-IAFT-The-7-Deadly-Screenwriting-Sins

Screenplay Links

The WGA’s list of 101 best screenplayshttp://www.wga.org/subpage_newsevents.aspx?id=1807

Good Will Hunting – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Good-Will-Hunting.html

The Piano – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Piano,-The.html

The Pianist – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Pianist,-The.html

The Proposal – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Proposal,-The.html

Rabbit Proof Fence – http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/5480488.Rabbit_proof_Fence_Screenplay

The Talented Mr. Ripley – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Talented-Mr.-Ripley,-The.html

Sense and Sensibility – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Sense-and-Sensibility.html

The Shawshank Redemption – http://www.imsdb.com/Movie%20Scripts/Shawshank%20Redemption,%20The%20Script.html

Sideways – http://www.imsdb.com/Movie%20Scripts/Sideways%20Script.html

Never Been Kissed – http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Never-Been-Kissed.html

Pi (Nine Act reversed structure) – http://www.imsdb.com/Movie%20Scripts/Pi%20Script.html

Pulp Fiction – http://www.godamongdirectors.com/scripts/pulp.shtml

As Good as it Gets – http://sfy.ru/sfy.html?script=as_good_as_it_gets

Whew!  I think this is a simple and great start.